Theorange lights move on water like wavey long hair
January 8th, 2013 in Uncategorized |
Well done Kyle your description is verry good.I like the way you said the lights are like wavey long hair,I can see a clear picture of them. Try to describe the outside more,like the sky.
WELL DONE you have spelt everything right but you forgot to do a space bettwen (the) and (orange) 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
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