….the temperture suddendly dropped and…
We were having a lovely picnic with lemonade,ham sandwiches and jam tarts on a sunny day, then the temperture suddenly dropped and it started tipping it down with rain. We had to pack up quickly,hair dripping with rain and our clothes soaking wet,the sandwiches were soggy therefore ruined. Our jug that was filled with lemonade had spilled with all the commotion whilst we were running down the slippy hill. The picnic basket had rolled down the hill with the rest of our jam tarts in it getting squashed and making our picnic basket sticky. The soggy sandwiches were in a bush and our day was ruined.
October 16th, 2012 at 11:58
I can just picture this. Great description!
October 16th, 2012 at 12:01
Oh no Ella, this sounds like an awful day out. There isn’t anything worse than soggy sandwiches.
October 16th, 2012 at 12:07
Great story Ella, I would of liked to try that jam tart. Good work
October 17th, 2012 at 17:31
reaaly well done ella i wonder what will happen next !!!!!!!!!!!!