One Winters Morning (Poem)
One winters morning
I gazed out of my window and saw,
A blanket of snow falling to earth, like a cushion full of confetti.
Then in the distance I saw a snowflake flicker then fall gracefully on the white snowy ground.
A steady car came down the road carefully like a snail slithering across the sparkling road.
The snow was as soft as a snow leopards fur, as white as a polar bear and as calm as a elephant.
BY EWAN AND JAMES D
December 12th, 2012 at 14:24
I like the funky colours! But if I’m 100% honest… as calm as an elephant?
December 12th, 2012 at 14:25
Well done just why did you put as calm as a elephant
December 13th, 2012 at 12:40
well done Ewan and James you done a great poem and a superb use of similies.
December 14th, 2012 at 12:55
well and ewan james !!!!
December 14th, 2012 at 14:11
Very realistic its like a lovly poem full of couler amazing descripsion.
December 17th, 2012 at 16:36
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December 20th, 2012 at 10:46
I like your poem.It has got really discriptive languege inculding the similys you put in.Keep up the good work.